Journal Four from Amanda Gifford

The chapter on imagery was very insightful describing the many different forms that help efficiently develop the scenes, settings, and characters. When one imagines a setting or object they can see it clearly and trying to portray it to someone else through poetry can be challenging. Not everyone will perceive it exactly as the writer intends or as it is portrayed in the line.  Along with the help of similes and metaphors the other devices are very helpful in the development of the subject matter. Alliteration is descriptive using the same starting letter of the word to give a smooth flow. Figurative language creates expression allowing depth of perception to what the writer feels or imagines.  Although these techniques are helpful, they can be overwhelming when used excessively.  By applying the thought process, poetry style and rules has made me more conscious of word choice and placement within the poem.

Poetry may express a personal reflection of the writer’s worldview.  Passion and personal experiences provide insight and knowledge which spark inspiration for poems that can enlighten others.  Throughout history generations and societal norms can be depicted by challenging or defining an individual’s perception. Criticism can play a role of keeping with traditional thought process or create division to creatively open new ideas for society. Inspiration for your perspective can be found where its least expected and have a rewarding insight on this journey of understanding life.

It was interesting reading Sharon Olds subjects that inspired her to write of her personal experiences that could be considered taboo to societal standards. Expressing profound emotion is may be portrayed as vulnerability and receives criticism almost as if the act of expressing is too emotional. Although she’s received crude criticism towards her work that some consider as being borderline pornographic with a flair of narcissism did hinder her desire to succeed. The poem the “Unborn” caught my attention for being short, but packed with emotion. Her imagery of the children hanging around her conscience like gnats was very powerfully portrayed.  She expresses a deep mourning for motherhood and children, many children, and her emptiness and endless longing.